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Shane Petosa-Sigel  Eng. 204-A  The Light Behind The Eyes  The monitor hummed softly as Bob ran his fingers across its sleek and luminescent face. Light projections of blue and green danced along the otherwise transparent surface of the glass as he scrolled and tapped, their soft ebbing glow reflecting in the dark windows of his eyes.Continue reading “The Light Behind The Eyes: The Final and Full story by Shane Petosa-Sigel”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? This story worked well! It was interesting and I had fun reading it. If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend?Continue reading “Story Response: “Hot Blooded” by Cameron Hughes”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? This story works well as a general narrative I think, and I like the medieval themes If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, whatContinue reading “Story Response: “The Knight and The Dragon II: The Prince Dragonrider” by Iwi Cobb-Adams”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? I love reading Joelʻs work it has amazing poetic world-building! This story works so well! If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what wouldContinue reading “Story Response: “The gods among men” by Joel Llop”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? This story is good. I like the narrative and the characters! If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please baseContinue reading “Story Response: “The Dragon King” by Joseph Valle”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? This story is a nice first person view about the thrill of surfing. Very interesting. If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what wouldContinue reading “Story Response: “Pipeline” by Agullana”

Devise a scenario in which someone (yourself or otherwise) struggles to replace or compensate for something/someone that has been lost:   It always felt, in the purest moments of my childhood, that I may never get older. Like I was one of the lost boys of Peter Pan, never to feel the crisp and bitter stab of adultContinue reading ““The Other End” — A work in Progress by Shane Petosa-Sigel”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? This story works well, definitely has a surprise and grip factor on the first paragraph. If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what wouldContinue reading “Story Response: “Fuck” by A. Maring-Hew”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? This story was not at all what I was expecting, but it was really interesting towards the end especially. Cameron has routinely created stories that surprise and divulge away fromContinue reading “Story Response: “Bedside Manner” by Cameron Hughes”

On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:How does this story work? This story works very well. The beginning paragraph is really interesting and it sets up the tone of the story very well. If the story doesn’t work as well asContinue reading “Story Response: “Sweet Dreams” by David Kila”