On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
This story works well as a general narrative I think, and I like the medieval themes
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
I wish there was more descriptive word-choice or if it was more in depth! Add more detail!
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