On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
I love reading Joelʻs work it has amazing poetic world-building! This story works so well!
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
No recommendations, but please write more I love these stories!
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