On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
This story is a nice first person view about the thrill of surfing. Very interesting.
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
No recommendations. Keep writing!
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