On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
This story works very well. The beginning paragraph is really interesting and it sets up the tone of the story very well.
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
Maybe more descriptive imagery? I liked the story, maybe no recommendations.
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