On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
This story works through the first person, as a woman is telling the story through her first person experience of being horrifically turned into a stuffed rabbit.
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
Maybe be a bit more descriptive or clear about what is happening, especially during the end, we want to know in depth the interesting things that are happening!
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