On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
This story works well, definitely has a surprise and grip factor on the first paragraph.
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
No recommendations.
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