On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
This story was not at all what I was expecting, but it was really interesting towards the end especially. Cameron has routinely created stories that surprise and divulge away from his peers original expectations of his narratives. We are constantly interested in what twist he has in store for us.
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
I have no recommendations.. Great story Cameron!
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