On your blog, or in a private email to the writer and to me, respond to the following for each story:
How does this story work?
I love the imagery and setting in this story. It was very interesting to keep learning things about the character and his mother because of the reactions and responses he has to the various things found inside the empty house. This story flows very nicely, its like a poem that grew.
If the story doesn’t work as well as it could in some areas, what would you recommend? Please base your recommendations in your understanding of the writer’s intentions.
I have no recommendations, just write more. Good job!
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